Rin "Orin" Sanguinna

Name: Rin “Orin” Sanguinna (Rin = phosphorous, Sanguinna = red)

Gender: Female

Race: Feline Faunus

Age: 19 (2nd year, joined Beacon a year late)

Personality: Orin is a calm, collective person who often thinks about what she does or says before she actually puts it into action. She often wanders around the schoolgrounds or around town in search of something to do, and if she fails to find something to rid her of boredom, she'll quickly become a grumpy individual who isn't smiles and happiness like she usually is. Orin is also a 'noble' sort of person, who prides herself in the way she speaks and presents herself. She is a bit prudish as well, meaning she tends to be excessively proper or modest in speech. Another thing to is that while her clothes may reveal a bit of her chest, Orin is no slut or whore. In fact, she's still saving her first kiss for that special someone, assuming she finds them.

Orin is a masochist, meaning she enjoys physical pain instead of disliking it like most people. She doesn't know when the particular enjoyment for pain sprung up for her, but she knows that hurting herself feels good, even though it has a lot of downsides. There is a limit to how much pain Orin can tolerate, as deep stab wounds and deep cuts are just too much for her to handle. She can take quite a thrashing, and has a very high pain threshold, but cannot withstand pain forever. Little pains she feels pleasure from, moderate pains like bigger, shallow cut wounds she'll take immense pleasure in, but any higher than that she can hardly tolerate at all.

Orin doesn't think of herself higher than others, as she knows her place in the world very well but still exudes an air of authority or superiority. She says herself that it's unintentional, and that people just seem to think of her as such because of how she dresses, speaks, and acts in public. But then they see that she's actually a perverted masochist who enjoys using innuendo to throw people off or to mess with them and then they don’t think so highly of her. It's a habit she has that she still hasn't gotten rid of, and she doesn't really see any need to. It's not like she's hurting anyone. In fact, she likes being a pervert to some degree.

Appearance:

Height: 5’8”
Weight: 139 lbs.
Hair: Long, crimson hair that is tied into two long braided ponytails that reach down to her thighs. Her bangs are a bit messy, stopping just above her eyes, and she wears two bows just below her kitty ears, and two at the bottom of her braids. The bows are black, with red, hollow, heart shaped designs on them, with a gold embroidered trim. The braided ponytails reach past her waist in length.
Eyes: Red
Skin Tone: Light skin tone with a slender curvy figure.
Appearance: Orin is a tall and slender girl with curves in all the right places. Her chest is surprisingly generous despite not looking it, though she doesn't like to flaunt it around. Her face is a smooth, rounded one that often carries a playful smile on it most of the time. Orin's eyes are crimson colored and gentle looking, often looking for something to entertain herself with so she won't be bored all the time. Her most notable bodily features are her two black cat ears, and two black cat tails, as well as the sharp canines that come with being part cat. Her nails very long and sharp, painted pink for her thumb, ring, and pinkie finger, blue for the middle finger, and red for the index finger on both hands.


Reference Picture: https://i.imgur.com/uIBRwke.jpg

Representation: Rin's concept is taken from the kasha, a type of youkai that appears during stormy weather to bring the bodies of sinners to Hell. They are said to be cats that have turned into youkai through various circumstances such as long life.

Color: Red

Semblance: Orin’s semblance is the ability to generate a black substance from anywhere on her body. This substance can be manipulated in any way she wants, as it flows like a liquid and she can control it telekinetically anywhere around her, so long as it stays within 10 feet. Anywhere past the 10 feet mark she will cause the substance to degenerate and vanish instantaneously. This substance can be manipulated in a great number of ways, and can be very versatile with it’s usage.

The substance has abnormal properties, as it flows like a liquid and is controlled as such, but is as hard and dense as steel. The amount of this substance that Orin controls is equal in mass to her own bodily mass. She can generate no more, no less. The substance can form any shape she so wishes, with the hardness and density of steel so it can be used as whatever. She can mold it as whatever she wants, so it can be used as a blade, a projectile, platforms to walk on. She could even fly with it by making a moving platform.

The downsides to this is that it’s not armor piercing because it’s steel-like at best, it’s limited to JUST 10 feet, and it’s equal in mass to her so there’s a very finite amount.

The substance degenerates and regenerates in just a few seconds, so it’s not all that big of a deal. It's speed is only moderate at best, and is easy to dodge, nor can it move fast enough to block a bullet (assuming it's not already in place to do so). It can mold into things somewhat quickly, although not fast enough to counter a bullet though, as stated before. It takes time to mold things with specific shapes, but general shapes like cubes or flat surfaces are quite easy to make. Still not the fastest, but not particularly slow either.

Emblem:

Bio: Orin’s life was full of other people trying to control what she did and said, giving her very few open choices in life. Almost all of the time, her parents and family were the ones telling her what to do. Since she grew up not knowing much, or about the world around her, she simply complied without a second thought. That is, until she grew up to the age of 18. But let’s backtrack for a second.

Orin was born to two, seemingly loving parents who were very rich and famous. Both of her parents were hunters, but had seen enough of the world and didn’t want to partake in any more hunter business. They had done their job enough, they didn’t need anymore. Both of them retired around their late 30s, and then they got together and had a beautiful baby daughter they named Rin, and nicknamed “Orin” when the girl couldn’t manage to say her own name properly as a child.

When Orin began to grow up, she wasn’t let outside of the house often, and lived an incredibly sheltered life. She made no friends besides the servants who kept the household spotless, and was left alone to read books or attend classes from her tutors every day, almost all day for many years. Upon reaching the age of 15, she felt she needed something more in her life. She was at that rebellious age, and knew it, and so she felt that now would be the time to find something greater in life to dedicate herself to. Unfortunately her parents caught her when she tried to sneak out of the household, and when she told them what she had done, they grounded her for months before explaining why they didn’t want her out in the world just yet. Orin disagreed with their reasonings and convinced them to teach her the ways of a hunter. They agreed, and began to teach her what it was like to be a hunter, and about the outside world. It was then that they would take her to see the world and it’s inhabitants. She saw all the good and the bad, the sad and the bitter. Orin was exposed to all of it.

Flash forwards to the age of 18, she was admitted and accepted into Beacon where she then began to further train as a hunter. Free from her parents and feeling ready to make her own decisions for once, she joined a team and began to make her own choices. Unfortunately they tended to end in disaster.

In the present day Orin is just trying to live her live, and is saving all of the difficult decisions for later so she can focus on finding her way until the day she needs to make those choices.



Attire: Orin's clothes consist of a black dress that stops a little bit above her knees, with the upper half looking like a corset with long sleeves. From the chest up is exposed, including her shoulders, and the top edges are all frilly including the tops of the sleeves. The bottom of the lower dress part has two layers of frills, while the top of the corset part (as well as below the bust) are single layered frills. The bust of the corset looks loose, and the only reason it doesn't fall of is because of the two straps that reach from the back of her dress over her shoulders and onto the corset to keep it from falling down. The bust of the corset has three red buttons going down the center, and below the bust are the scarlet laces that keep it tight to her body. Well, mostly tight. Orin doesn't usually keep the corset too tight, but not too loose so it would just fall off. The sleeves of the dress expand outwards towards the end, while the ends themselves have advanced black embroidery patterns on the end. Orin also wears long, pale, bright red stockings that reach halfway up her thighs, with fancy heart shaped tessellations running along them, as well as black ribbons that wrap around her forelegs and tie into a bow around the back, the remaining ribbon flowing loosely. Her shoes are black platform high heels with white around the top, making her seem a few inches taller than usual (around 5'11", when she's actually 5' 8").

(Or you could just refer to her reference picture)

Fighting style: Orin’s fighting style consists of mixing it up with rapid attacks and lots of movement involving her semblance and weapon. She tends to fight at as far a range as her semblance will allow her, but sometimes is forced to fight close range (much to her dismay).

Weapon Name: Decesso Candido (Snow White Death)

Weapon Range: Melee, Long

Weapon type: Parasol with a hidden blade and a gun

Weapon Description:Decesso Candido is a white parasol, where a blade is hidden inside that is connected to the handle. It also serves as a gun, with a trigger several inches away from the handle. Below the trigger is covered in a special material made for keeping a good grip, although it doesn’t look any different from the rest of the parasol

Spoiler:

Weapon Abilities: The handle is actually connected to a long, thin blade that hides inside the parasol. The parasol is also a gun, with the bullets ranging from normal .357 mm revolver ammo, to dust rounds. Below the frame that holds the parasol open are six revolver chambers that can be opened and loaded with ease and the trigger is somewhere above the handle of the parasol, so she can have her sword drawn and still have somewhere to hold the parasol.


Family: None

Strengths and Weaknesses: Very intelligent and polite, often keeping her composure around others. When she’s in an area with less people, regardless of whether she knows them or not, she’ll let loose the rest of her personality, which unfortunately isn’t so nice. This causes a few rumors to spread about her. She’s also kind and caring about others, taking other people’s thoughts into consideration quite often. Orin is also quite capable when it comes to combat strategy, and she often uses her wits and skills, as well as her semblance, to trick her opponents and turn the tides in her favor.

But again, she’s a bit of a pervert which can get her into trouble sometimes. Another thing to note is the fact she is also kind of failing in real combat prowess when it comes to physical ability, relying on her semblance far more than she should. Lately she’s been trying to work on that, but it hasn’t been going well. Orin also has a habit of not sleeping when she should, meaning she’ll be awake far longer than she should, and so she’s sometimes much more tired than she needs to be. She’s also very bad at group decision making, as she is used to having other people tell her what to do but she is pretty damn good figuring out how to fight for herself, just not in a group. Orin isn't the fastest or the strongest, but can make up for it with wits and skill rather than sheer power or ability.

Other: Not that I know of.

First things first. The reference picture leads to a dead link.

Edited. The link was working a while ago but I guess it got messed up? I reuploaded the picture to imgur so it'll be fine now.

Most of it looks good. I'm a bit iffy about the semblance considering it has a broad spectrum of possible uses and blatantly saying gives you room to pretty much pull whatever you decide to make it with it. I would mostly like to see a speed gauge on it. How fast can she move the black mass and how fast can it shift into things exactly?

Also, I'd prefer to see something more tactical and combat related under strengths and weaknesses. Something physical rather than psychological or personality related.

Added a paragraph to the end of the semblance

Added a sentence to the end of both paragraphs of her weakness. Didn't really know what to say about it though...

I can't help but think saying her strength is her ability to form combat strategies but her weakness is an inability to make decisions and is used to taking orders, but I suppose it's not a pressing issue to be concerned with.

Recommended.

I'm going to have to ask that you make her a different year, due to limited availability for spaces.

edited~

I'm not seeing any major issues, so...