Jacqueline Bleu

Name: Jacqueline Bleu

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Age: 17

Personality: Jacqueline is a rather stoic girl, known for being quiet and shy around people. She is known to be rather sensitive as well, as she calls it "Very in touch with her emotions." She is rather trusting of people, even if they don't necessarily deserve it, and it usually results in later hurt, but she doesn't seem to have any desire to change her criteria for trust. She is also rather insecure about the little things she perceives to be wrong with her appearance. She is VERY sensitive about her weight, and is often seen dieting on and off. She has an affiliation for sweets, and this often clashes with said diets.  She has a very strong dedication to her friends and family, and is often polite, but has a bit of a wild side that she doesn't show. She listens to heavy rock and club and techno music, and owns a few more questionable pieces of clothing, though she doesn't wear them around people she knows, and is rather embarrassed to show that side of her. She is also very prideful of her abilities to write and her marksmanship and fencing skill. Also, being from a relatively rich family, she does show a bit of an attitude of entitlement from time to time, but generally controls it. She also shows a bit of ignorance in the ways of common people, such as being conservative with money.

Appearance: Jacqueline stands at roughly 5' 4" and weighs around 125lbs. She has a bit of pudge around her sides and waist, and the rest of her weight comes from rather toned arms and muscular legs. She has a B-cup chest, with a waist and hip of 29" and 39" respectively. Her skin is slightly tanned, but of a light complexion, making her around the average shade of skin for a white girl. Her eyes are a deep crystal blue, and her hair is of a darker shade of blue, often mistaken for a dyed color. She wears it long and loose, the majority of it reaching down to about chest level on her back. She often wears it all pushed back, saved for her bangs, which are pulled forward, and pushed to the side, clipped to the side of her hair by a butterfly-shaped hairpin. She has a rather gentle face, with a lightly slanted jaw and high-set cheekbones that give her a very beautiful, feminine look. Her Long Eyelashes drag attention to her eyes, though her ears are turned out slightly. On her collarbone she has a tattoo of a butterfly with gold and blue wings. The tattoo is rather small and sits below the collar of most shirts.

Representation: d'Artagnan of the Three Musketeers. (The Hunters and Huntresses representing the Musketeers of the Guard)

Color: Oxford Blue

Semblance: Jacqueline shows an odd ability to be able to control metals in sorts of odd manners, usually by freezing them in one spot, or by bending or moving them at will. Her aura coats the metal, usually a weapon, and gives it a bit of outward pressure as well as an eerie blue tint. However, if she puts metal into motion with her semblance, and stops it, she looses control, and if she stops something, and moves it, or releases her hold, she looses control. Her semblance is spread through touch, so by touching metal, she can control it. The semblance can also move into any metal touching that metal, extending her control. However, only certain metals are effected. So far, Iron, Steel, Copper, Alluminum, and platinum have been confirmed to "conduct" her semblance, while Silver, bronze, gold, and Mercury have been confirmed not to conduct it.

Emblem: A butterfly with Blue and gold wings that are designed like a stained glass window.

Bio: Jacqueline comes from a land a tad ways east from the continent of Vytal, and a tad bit north. Where she is from, she was born as the fifth daughter, and seventh child into a fairly rich and aristocratic family. She was the youngest, and was often doted on for being the prettiest of the girls. For this reason, her sisters often taunted her about her ears, or about her weight whenever she put on a little. Insecure about it, she began wearing her hair long and down from a very young age, while the rest of her family often wore their hair short or put up.

Aside from family relations, and despite her girlish looks, Jackie was the tomboy girl in her family, and often got into scrapes with local boys over matters such as when they would bully stray animals or younger children. She would often explore in the nearby woods, and come back cut up, scraped, and dirty. While maturing and instruction by her family eradicated her fighting nature, her adventurous spirit never faded, and around the age of 13, she happened upon an old newspaper telling of a huntress named Glynda Goodwitch, and an interview with her that told of her exploits as a huntress. Of course, it was rather old, but Jacqueline instantly found a role model. She began studying into being a huntress, despite her mother's refusal to condone the choice.

The the age of 15 she told her father, who she felt would be more sympathetic, that he wanted to go to beacon for secondary schooling, instead of being home schooled further. She could have chosen any school, but she heard Ms. Goodwitch was working there, and that influenced her decision. Her father told her then that he used to be a hunter when he was young, but he left the corps and married, becoming a father instead. He hoped this would deter her, but Jackie only wanted to be like him in this sense, wanting to follow in his footsteps.

At 16, she put in an application for Beacon secretly, and even arranged for one of the family's servants to drive her 15 hours into Vale so she could interview, while her parents believed she was visiting a pen pall. She paid an underground rogue to forge her parent's signature on the permission form, and a week before the year started, she announced all that she had done to her family, and said she was going whether they wanted her too or not...but in a rather polite manner. Her parents didn't approve, but didn't stop her, and she was driven into Vale for her first day at school, bringing along a tad too much luggage for people NOT to label her as a rich girl.


Attire: Jacqueline dresses very modestly with her figure in mind, though hiding most of her torso and legs behind fabric. She wears a knee length black skirt most of the time, either navy blue or black, or she wears black sweatpants if a skirt doesn't suit the situation. She also wears black kneesocks all the time, and black flats. On her torso, she usually wears a closed navy blue blazer, and a white shirt with a slight poof at the front of the color. On the blazer's right breast is her family emblem. When she doesn't wear this she either wears a white t-shirt or a black one. For pajamas, Jackie owns a deep blue nightgown made of silk, and for formal occasions, she owns a blue wrap dress and matching shoes, the dress having a blue ribbon on the waist.

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Fighting style: Jacqueline has a very elegant looking fighting style, mostly using spins and precise steps to make attacks flow together. Her common strategy is to dual-weild Porthos and Athos, the Pistol in her left hand, her Estoc in her right. She relies on speed and fluid movements, precise strikes and accurate gunplay rather than brute force or power. When close, she pulls out her dagger and uses a bit of a royal hand-to-hand style her family passed down.

Weapon Name: Porthos (Pistol), Athos (Estoc), Aramis (Misericorde)

Weapon Range: Short to mid range

Weapon type: Porthos is a Service Revolver Pistol, Athos is an Estoc-style longsword, and Aramis is a Misericorde dagger.

Weapon Description: Porthos is a Single Action Revolver-style pistol with a 20 shot cylinder with no special paintjob. Due to it's special cylinder design, there is no way to quick load it. This makes Jacqueline carry a full spare cylinder. Any additional shots needed have to be manually loaded into a cylinder. It also is smooth-barreled, making it rather inaccurate for any range exceeding 5 yards

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Athos is an estoc of 50 in in total length, the blade itself taking up 40 in. The handle only accounts for one sword, and the cross gaurd is designed to be only just enough to block the hands from grazing strikes.

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Aramis is a very thin dagger with a rounded handle and a flat blade, with a history of delivering the death stroke to people that had received and were suffering from Mortal wounds. It is an average dagger with a cross guard, and also sports a ring at the guard to allow it to be spun and manipulated with the fingers.

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Weapon Abilities: Aramis, Porthos, and Athos do not have any special qualities to them.


Family: 4 sisters and 2 brothers, mother and father. All unnamed

Strengths and Weaknesses: Jacqueline often expects things to be handed to her, regardless of how often she shows it. She is also naive to the ways of the world, and while well versed in the academic needs to be a huntress, she lacks considerable combat experience, and has only minimal instruction compared to other beacon students. She is also quite lacking in raw strength, making her depend on other tactics to win a fight. However, Jacqueline's instruction in marksmanship and fencing give her elegant and swift combat that helps make up for her strength.

Other:

Missing a bit down there. And a few grammar errors here and there.

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Well, you made weakness's, without any strengths.

And I'm little confused by her Semblance. It can control metal? Or does it modify physical vectors somehow?

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The semblance allows her to either put certain metals in motion, or make them stop if they are in motion. When she looses control of already moving metal, it continues to move, and when the metal was not moving, it drops dead. So it's kind of like control i guess 0-0